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The lake

Standing here with you

the lake is so much brighter

When I stood here with ---

the lake was dim

the fish silent

the wind blowing hardย 

and the water murky

With you K

The fish are out

The sun is shining

the water is clear

Im happyย 

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15 hours ago, Alexbeach said:

The lake

Standing here with you

the lake is so much brighter

When I stood here with ---

the lake was dim

the fish silent

the wind blowing hardย 

and the water murky

With you K

The fish are out

The sun is shining

the water is clear

Im happyย 

What a beautiful poem. I get the impression that you wrote this for someone special. Is that right?

Thanks so much for sharing your poems with us. If you want to have them all in one place you could think about starting your own blog for your poemsย https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/blogs/ย Please don't feel you have to.ย This is just an ideaย ๐Ÿ™‚

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2 hours ago, Aurora said:

What a beautiful poem. I get the impression that you wrote this for someone special. Is that right?

Thanks so much for sharing your poems with us. If you want to have them all in one place you could think about starting your own blog for your poemsย https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/blogs/ย Please don't feel you have to.ย This is just an ideaย ๐Ÿ™‚

Oh yeah I forgot I could do that!! Thanks!

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On 2/21/2024 at 5:37 PM, Alexbeach said:

The lake

Standing here with you

the lake is so much brighter

When I stood here with ---

the lake was dim

the fish silent

the wind blowing hardย 

and the water murky

With you K

The fish are out

The sun is shining

the water is clear

Im happyย 

Heyy @Alexbeach, I really like this poemย ๐Ÿ˜€

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