AshtonBeach Posted February 21, 2024 Share Posted February 21, 2024 The lake Standing here with you the lake is so much brighter When I stood here with --- the lake was dim the fish silent the wind blowing hard and the water murky With you K The fish are out The sun is shining the water is clear Im happy 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/7605-the-lake/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digital Mentor Aurora Posted February 22, 2024 Digital Mentor Share Posted February 22, 2024 15 hours ago, Alexbeach said: The lake Standing here with you the lake is so much brighter When I stood here with --- the lake was dim the fish silent the wind blowing hard and the water murky With you K The fish are out The sun is shining the water is clear Im happy What a beautiful poem. I get the impression that you wrote this for someone special. Is that right? Thanks so much for sharing your poems with us. If you want to have them all in one place you could think about starting your own blog for your poems https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/blogs/ Please don't feel you have to. This is just an idea MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/7605-the-lake/#findComment-99402 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AshtonBeach Posted February 22, 2024 Author Share Posted February 22, 2024 2 hours ago, Aurora said: What a beautiful poem. I get the impression that you wrote this for someone special. Is that right? Thanks so much for sharing your poems with us. If you want to have them all in one place you could think about starting your own blog for your poems https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/blogs/ Please don't feel you have to. This is just an idea Oh yeah I forgot I could do that!! Thanks! 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/7605-the-lake/#findComment-99414 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digital Mentor Luie Posted February 24, 2024 Digital Mentor Share Posted February 24, 2024 On 2/21/2024 at 5:37 PM, Alexbeach said: The lake Standing here with you the lake is so much brighter When I stood here with --- the lake was dim the fish silent the wind blowing hard and the water murky With you K The fish are out The sun is shining the water is clear Im happy Heyy @Alexbeach, I really like this poem MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/7605-the-lake/#findComment-99560 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AshtonBeach Posted February 25, 2024 Author Share Posted February 25, 2024 w On 2/24/2024 at 9:32 AM, Luie said: Heyy @Alexbeach, I really like this poem Aww Thank you :) 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/7605-the-lake/#findComment-99606 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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