TinyDinos Posted January 25, 2023 Share Posted January 25, 2023 Darker than my normal stuff but meh here we go: Mine Softly through the years we danced Living in pure bliss I never realized I missed Little bits going missing You were my best friend The superhero in my movie called ‘life’ There to catch me when I fell As long as you were home anyway Mine Mine Mine Always there. Time passes. A funny thing time is, isn't it? It defines and yet it’s altogether irrelevant all at the same time. No matter my worthless musings You have more important things to worry about At least I still know you’re here To catch me when I slip You’re always ready and near After you beat this level, obviously. Mine Mine Mine Mostly there. Taller my small hands reach I physically need less and less Mental needs are another story Kids are mean. I no longer need a knight in shining armor I just need a blanket Something to shield and comfort From the harsh reality I live in. At least my partner in crime wouldn’t berate me Wouldn’t leave me alone. After you come home from spending time with them, of course. You can catch yourself. Mine Mine Mine? Neither here nor there. Sanity is a fragile thing In fact I find it to be relative Who’s to say that I’m unstable When I’m the best I’ve ever been? For now anyways. There are layers to sanity Anyone knows You’re fine until one day When you s n a p . i fell. i lie motionless, reeling from the revelation of what was there all along. one thought echoes in my mind: mine mine mine As the leaves brown, I wither too Is there any point? What was this worth? I beg of you, come back. Bring back the sun-filled days Where I watch through rose-tinted lenses The days of the past. Before I knew. Before I understood. Before I noticed. At least I have memories. mine mine mine Y’know what they say: Hindsight is 20/20. But really? Anxiety is 2020. The year my life fell apart. When I fell, and I fell hard. All by myself. I’m older now. I know what you’ve done. And it scares me. Because a part of you will always be Mine Mine Mine and i don’t wanna hurt anybody 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/6068-here%E2%80%99s-one-more-and-then-i%E2%80%99ll-stop-posting-lol/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digital Mentor Aurora Posted January 25, 2023 Digital Mentor Share Posted January 25, 2023 8 hours ago, TinyDinos said: Darker than my normal stuff but meh here we go: Mine Softly through the years we danced Living in pure bliss I never realized I missed Little bits going missing You were my best friend The superhero in my movie called ‘life’ There to catch me when I fell As long as you were home anyway Mine Mine Mine Always there. Time passes. A funny thing time is, isn't it? It defines and yet it’s altogether irrelevant all at the same time. No matter my worthless musings You have more important things to worry about At least I still know you’re here To catch me when I slip You’re always ready and near After you beat this level, obviously. Mine Mine Mine Mostly there. Taller my small hands reach I physically need less and less Mental needs are another story Kids are mean. I no longer need a knight in shining armor I just need a blanket Something to shield and comfort From the harsh reality I live in. At least my partner in crime wouldn’t berate me Wouldn’t leave me alone. After you come home from spending time with them, of course. You can catch yourself. Mine Mine Mine? Neither here nor there. Sanity is a fragile thing In fact I find it to be relative Who’s to say that I’m unstable When I’m the best I’ve ever been? For now anyways. There are layers to sanity Anyone knows You’re fine until one day When you s n a p . i fell. i lie motionless, reeling from the revelation of what was there all along. one thought echoes in my mind: mine mine mine As the leaves brown, I wither too Is there any point? What was this worth? I beg of you, come back. Bring back the sun-filled days Where I watch through rose-tinted lenses The days of the past. Before I knew. Before I understood. Before I noticed. At least I have memories. mine mine mine Y’know what they say: Hindsight is 20/20. But really? Anxiety is 2020. The year my life fell apart. When I fell, and I fell hard. All by myself. I’m older now. I know what you’ve done. And it scares me. Because a part of you will always be Mine Mine Mine and i don’t wanna hurt anybody Thank you for sharing - this has touched me. Your poem really tells a story that (at least in parts) a lot of us can relate to. And to me I can feel the raw emotion in it!! You're really talented. Keep doing what you're doing !! 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/6068-here%E2%80%99s-one-more-and-then-i%E2%80%99ll-stop-posting-lol/#findComment-63032 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyDinos Posted January 25, 2023 Author Share Posted January 25, 2023 7 hours ago, Aurora said: Thank you for sharing - this has touched me. Your poem really tells a story that (at least in parts) a lot of us can relate to. And to me I can feel the raw emotion in it!! You're really talented. Keep doing what you're doing !! Thank you!!! I’m so glad that the work I’m producing can be enjoyed by others too. I usually don’t write but I’m starting to do it now as a form of coping when things get hard and it’s working well so I’m trying to keep up with it. :) MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/6068-here%E2%80%99s-one-more-and-then-i%E2%80%99ll-stop-posting-lol/#findComment-63195 Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Aussie- Posted January 26, 2023 Share Posted January 26, 2023 On 1/24/2023 at 9:49 PM, TinyDinos said: Darker than my normal stuff but meh here we go: Mine Softly through the years we danced Living in pure bliss I never realized I missed Little bits going missing You were my best friend The superhero in my movie called ‘life’ There to catch me when I fell As long as you were home anyway Mine Mine Mine Always there. Time passes. A funny thing time is, isn't it? It defines and yet it’s altogether irrelevant all at the same time. No matter my worthless musings You have more important things to worry about At least I still know you’re here To catch me when I slip You’re always ready and near After you beat this level, obviously. Mine Mine Mine Mostly there. Taller my small hands reach I physically need less and less Mental needs are another story Kids are mean. I no longer need a knight in shining armor I just need a blanket Something to shield and comfort From the harsh reality I live in. At least my partner in crime wouldn’t berate me Wouldn’t leave me alone. After you come home from spending time with them, of course. You can catch yourself. Mine Mine Mine? Neither here nor there. Sanity is a fragile thing In fact I find it to be relative Who’s to say that I’m unstable When I’m the best I’ve ever been? For now anyways. There are layers to sanity Anyone knows You’re fine until one day When you s n a p . i fell. i lie motionless, reeling from the revelation of what was there all along. one thought echoes in my mind: mine mine mine As the leaves brown, I wither too Is there any point? What was this worth? I beg of you, come back. Bring back the sun-filled days Where I watch through rose-tinted lenses The days of the past. Before I knew. Before I understood. Before I noticed. At least I have memories. mine mine mine Y’know what they say: Hindsight is 20/20. But really? Anxiety is 2020. The year my life fell apart. When I fell, and I fell hard. All by myself. I’m older now. I know what you’ve done. And it scares me. Because a part of you will always be Mine Mine Mine and i don’t wanna hurt anybody I just red this and i relly like it. you are good are writing poems 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/6068-here%E2%80%99s-one-more-and-then-i%E2%80%99ll-stop-posting-lol/#findComment-63446 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyDinos Posted January 26, 2023 Author Share Posted January 26, 2023 59 minutes ago, -Maddie- said: I just red this and i relly like it. you are good are writing poems Thank you!!! I’m starting to really enjoy it MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/6068-here%E2%80%99s-one-more-and-then-i%E2%80%99ll-stop-posting-lol/#findComment-63481 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digital Mentor Aurora Posted January 27, 2023 Digital Mentor Share Posted January 27, 2023 On 1/25/2023 at 8:10 PM, TinyDinos said: Thank you!!! I’m so glad that the work I’m producing can be enjoyed by others too. I usually don’t write but I’m starting to do it now as a form of coping when things get hard and it’s working well so I’m trying to keep up with it. :) It sounds like writing poems might be quite therapeutic for you It's great when we find something that helps us to process our feelings. And you're really good at it!! I'm glad to hear you're getting so much joy out of it! MultiQuote Quote Link to comment https://forums.ditchthelabel.org/topic/6068-here%E2%80%99s-one-more-and-then-i%E2%80%99ll-stop-posting-lol/#findComment-63577 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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