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I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go:

 

 

Inspiration

 

I’ll make it myself.

My pen scribbles furiously

Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it

Creativity

The swipe of ink against paper

Adrenaline, my body craves

The rush of making something new

Pulls

Deep longing 

Where passion once resided

My canvas is still empty

Of course it is

I bang my head on my desk

Is this worth it?


 

now read it from the bottom up :)

 

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7 hours ago, TinyDinos said:

I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go:

Inspiration

I’ll make it myself.

My pen scribbles furiously

Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it

Creativity

The swipe of ink against paper

Adrenaline, my body craves

The rush of making something new

Pulls

Deep longing 

Where passion once resided

My canvas is still empty

Of course it is

I bang my head on my desk

Is this worth it?


 

now read it from the bottom up :)

That's so good!! Very inspiring 😀

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9 hours ago, TinyDinos said:

I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go:

Inspiration

I’ll make it myself.

My pen scribbles furiously

Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it

Creativity

The swipe of ink against paper

Adrenaline, my body craves

The rush of making something new

Pulls

Deep longing 

Where passion once resided

My canvas is still empty

Of course it is

I bang my head on my desk

Is this worth it?


 

now read it from the bottom up :)

This is really cool and it was fun to read

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8 hours ago, peanutbutterstruggles said:

woaaaah that's super cool!!

Yayyy I’m glad you like it :)

I wrote it for a school assignment and I was actually proud of it haha

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3 hours ago, Aurora said:

That's so good!! Very inspiring 😀

Thank you! I hoped it’d help me with artists’ block lol

No such luck yet, but maybe it’ll get me to write more poetry 🙃

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Just now, TinyDinos said:

, but maybe it’ll get me to write more poetry 🙃

If you write more i would so read it 

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1 hour ago, -Maddie- said:

This is really cool and it was fun to read

I’m glad you liked it!

This style is called reverse poetry and it’s really fun to write. I chose a lighter approach to it since I don’t often write poetry, but a lot of these are pessimistic when read one way, and hopeful when read the other. It’s a really fun style to read and write. 😁

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1 minute ago, -Maddie- said:

If you write more i would so read it 

Good to know haha

i might put another one up after I finish my schoolwork for today. :)

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Just now, TinyDinos said:

Good to know haha

i might put another one up after I finish my schoolwork for today. :)

You should I just look up what you did and its realy cool

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11 hours ago, TinyDinos said:

I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go:

Inspiration

I’ll make it myself.

My pen scribbles furiously

Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it

Creativity

The swipe of ink against paper

Adrenaline, my body craves

The rush of making something new

Pulls

Deep longing 

Where passion once resided

My canvas is still empty

Of course it is

I bang my head on my desk

Is this worth it?


 

now read it from the bottom up :)

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2 minutes ago, -Maddie- said:

You should I just look up what you did and its realy cool

Thank youuuuu 🥰

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2 minutes ago, TinyDinos said:

Thank youuuuu 🥰

Your welcome 😄

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