TinyTurtles Posted January 24 Share Posted January 24 (edited) I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go: Inspiration I’ll make it myself. My pen scribbles furiously Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it Creativity The swipe of ink against paper Adrenaline, my body craves The rush of making something new Pulls Deep longing Where passion once resided My canvas is still empty Of course it is I bang my head on my desk Is this worth it? now read it from the bottom up :) Edited January 24 by TinyDinos 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutbutterstruggles Posted January 24 Share Posted January 24 woaaaah that's super cool!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digital Mentor Aurora Posted January 24 Digital Mentor Share Posted January 24 7 hours ago, TinyDinos said: I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go: Inspiration I’ll make it myself. My pen scribbles furiously Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it Creativity The swipe of ink against paper Adrenaline, my body craves The rush of making something new Pulls Deep longing Where passion once resided My canvas is still empty Of course it is I bang my head on my desk Is this worth it? now read it from the bottom up :) That's so good!! Very inspiring 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Marra- Posted January 24 Share Posted January 24 9 hours ago, TinyDinos said: I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go: Inspiration I’ll make it myself. My pen scribbles furiously Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it Creativity The swipe of ink against paper Adrenaline, my body craves The rush of making something new Pulls Deep longing Where passion once resided My canvas is still empty Of course it is I bang my head on my desk Is this worth it? now read it from the bottom up :) This is really cool and it was fun to read 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyTurtles Posted January 24 Author Share Posted January 24 8 hours ago, peanutbutterstruggles said: woaaaah that's super cool!! Yayyy I’m glad you like it :) I wrote it for a school assignment and I was actually proud of it haha 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyTurtles Posted January 24 Author Share Posted January 24 3 hours ago, Aurora said: That's so good!! Very inspiring Thank you! I hoped it’d help me with artists’ block lol No such luck yet, but maybe it’ll get me to write more poetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Marra- Posted January 24 Share Posted January 24 Just now, TinyDinos said: , but maybe it’ll get me to write more poetry If you write more i would so read it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyTurtles Posted January 24 Author Share Posted January 24 1 hour ago, -Maddie- said: This is really cool and it was fun to read I’m glad you liked it! This style is called reverse poetry and it’s really fun to write. I chose a lighter approach to it since I don’t often write poetry, but a lot of these are pessimistic when read one way, and hopeful when read the other. It’s a really fun style to read and write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyTurtles Posted January 24 Author Share Posted January 24 1 minute ago, -Maddie- said: If you write more i would so read it Good to know haha i might put another one up after I finish my schoolwork for today. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Marra- Posted January 24 Share Posted January 24 Just now, TinyDinos said: Good to know haha i might put another one up after I finish my schoolwork for today. :) You should I just look up what you did and its realy cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digital Mentor Luie Posted January 24 Digital Mentor Share Posted January 24 11 hours ago, TinyDinos said: I don’t normally write poetry and I wanna get feedback so les go: Inspiration I’ll make it myself. My pen scribbles furiously Lack of inspiration seldom spawns it Creativity The swipe of ink against paper Adrenaline, my body craves The rush of making something new Pulls Deep longing Where passion once resided My canvas is still empty Of course it is I bang my head on my desk Is this worth it? now read it from the bottom up :) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinyTurtles Posted January 24 Author Share Posted January 24 2 minutes ago, -Maddie- said: You should I just look up what you did and its realy cool Thank youuuuu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Marra- Posted January 24 Share Posted January 24 2 minutes ago, TinyDinos said: Thank youuuuu Your welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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