Chabela Posted October 28, 2021 Share Posted October 28, 2021 What Should This Poem Be Named? It was about 3 years ago No, thirteen bodies of me turned to stone Collided with the normal me And there my body lies, in a coffin sleeping for what I know but not hope for forever And yes, some people have tried the shovel of pain Tried to save me from the dead They´ve only gotten to 6 feet and under. An alarm clock, waking me up from a dream that somebody, some gut to save me And you got down to the 30 feet With bare hands, no shovel to bring on me And I think I crossed over the street of boundaries And I tried to refrain, trying not to let you let me breathe But I make an excuse to sneeze and blush and never succeeding Mouth full of chocolate, making it less tempting to do something that´ll make the wall drip green in jealousy, purple getaway marks on my cheeks and necks I clutched your arms like stairway railings But I promised myself I wouldn't let you complete me 2 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lillyx Posted October 29, 2021 Share Posted October 29, 2021 16 hours ago, Chabela said: What Should This Poem Be Named? It was about 3 years ago No, thirteen bodies of me turned to stone Collided with the normal me And there my body lies, in a coffin sleeping for what I know but not hope for forever And yes, some people have tried the shovel of pain Tried to save me from the dead They´ve only gotten to 6 feet and under. An alarm clock, waking me up from a dream that somebody, some gut to save me And you got down to the 30 feet With bare hands, no shovel to bring on me And I think I crossed over the street of boundaries And I tried to refrain, trying not to let you let me breathe But I make an excuse to sneeze and blush and never succeeding Mouth full of chocolate, making it less tempting to do something that´ll make the wall drip green in jealousy, purple getaway marks on my cheeks and necks I clutched your arms like stairway railings But I promised myself I wouldn't let you complete me hey the key to my soul seems creepy but awesome! good idea 1 MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ditch the Label Staff Daisie Posted October 29, 2021 Ditch the Label Staff Share Posted October 29, 2021 This is very creative, quite fitting for Halloween season actually. What did you use to give you inspiration for your poem? MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chabela Posted October 29, 2021 Author Share Posted October 29, 2021 Oh I actually like writing things with deep meanings and I usually use some of memories that I have or emotions and create. and also one of my guy friends are usually under the inspiration of my poetry because of how much I care about him :) MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ditch the Label Staff Daisie Posted October 29, 2021 Ditch the Label Staff Share Posted October 29, 2021 30 minutes ago, Chabela said: Oh I actually like writing things with deep meanings and I usually use some of memories that I have or emotions and create. and also one of my guy friends are usually under the inspiration of my poetry because of how much I care about him :) Really inspirational, well done, it’s very well written. You should be proud, it’s good that you are able to put it down in an elegant way. MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chabela Posted October 29, 2021 Author Share Posted October 29, 2021 tysm! :DDD MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lillyx Posted October 29, 2021 Share Posted October 29, 2021 really glad you joined us we are so happy your here! post away we'd love to hear ya :) you matter <3 hugs MultiQuote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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