so i am like the best at writing drama and horror stories but i don't know if my stories are going to be good enough for this talented group of writers

No I haven’t I am currently working on the third chapter.

I think that's a great idea for a first chapter. It draws you in immediately and you're intrigued to find out what this is all about! Have you got the outline for your whole book already?

I decided to write a fantasy book. I only finished a short chapter one, but would like some opinions for other people! The chapter is below. Chapter 1 - Where the story ends, or begins! She rushes to the battle field ready to fight anything that gets in her path to save the kingdom. She cuts through bushes, branches, and nets to get to the dragon, at last she takes a jump and slices off the dragon's head! As Pearl was celebrating with her friends she thought to herself ´This scene had seemed all too familiar…´ ¨As it should be!¨said a mysterious voice in the shadows behind. Everyone Froze in shock. A little light gray head popped out of the shadows, followed by a little gray body with baby blue stripes, a fluffy tail, and four small paws. Pearl asked ¨Who are you and what do you want with me and my friends?¨ ¨I am the cat named Bell and I want for you to go back to the start!¨ Bell replied ¨And to see what you did wrong.¨ In a sudden, bright flash Pearl was where she had started, but she didn't remember that!

well, it started with just creating two D&D characters, and deciding that if we made our own world, we could write a deicent book about them. Most plot and characters one of us came up with on the spot, although we knew from the begining that Keres was going to be the kind of character you feel bad for, and that you were supposed to end up with kinda conflicting emotions about Faressa, but still end up pittying her. I guess as far as the rest of the insperation goes, we drew from some myths, some typical fantasy tropes, and things we find intresting in books.

Depressed all day Could not sleep well anyway I can just cry. Bye

My mom says I'm unique I just feel helpless and weak No one listens so i don't speak I'm so glad it's the end of the week It was so bleak.

I get you. Nobody ever listens to me, so I make up characters and write about them. I feel like they are listening. What do you write about?

I’m tied down by my brain, but my brain is also tied down with me. That’s how I see it. The psychologist sees it differently. She says I have a “verbal processing delay”, which is fancy talk for a fast brain and a slow mouth. The thing is, I always know what I want to say, but I don’t know what to say. I have all these ideas running around in my head trying to get out, but my mouth is a locked door, not allowing those ideas out. And when it does open, it lets only the smallest ideas out, and it stutters and stalls like an old engine. You could be among the stars, says the psychologist. You have the mind of a genius, but the world can’t hear it because your mouth is a locked door. So curb your brain and train it, and then maybe your brain won’t lunge ahead of your mouth. But I can’t do that. I won’t let my brain become that of a child when it could be that of an adult. I’ll put up with my slow mouth and fast brain and maybe I’ll grow out of it. That was last year. I haven’t grown out of it. And there’s a damn good chance I never will. And that’s why I write. It’s the only way I can let the ideas out of my head. My fingers move pretty slowly too, but they move faster than my mouth. And that’s something. When I write, I feel like I’m flying. But until I’m magically able to speak as well as I write, I am a balloon tied to a railing, straining for the stars.

Pushed down, broken and bruised I feel like im being used There i lie, on the ground Covered in my cold dark shroud Covered up, there I lie, All i do is cry inside Happiness is no more As I lie there on the floor

Should she meet alex at night? against what her fathers wishes are?

Travelers Lane. <3 Main Characters Alex Bindle - The apprentice who falls in love with Charlotte the master’s daughter Charlotte Churchman - The master's daughter who falls in love with Alex the apprentice Charity Green - Charlotte’s best friend Howard Churchman - The master, The father of Charlotte, and master to Alex Susan Churchman - Charlotte's mother, Howard's wife Side Characters: Still Important. Jenny Bindle - Alex’s mother, a widow, is happy for Alex but fears he and Charlotte cant be Dameon Green - Charity’s father, is against Alex and Charlotte being together, Howard’s friend Lisa Green - Charity’s mother, thinks Alex and Charlotte should elope, hates Mrs. Churchman Jim Peck - Silversmith, thinks Charlotte and Alex are being foolish, friend of Howard’s Lisa Peck - Jim’s wife, thinks that her husband is foolish, and Alex and Charlotte are in love John Paul - The preacher, believes that all love god made in heaven is for the better Extra Characters: Important but not to the story. The Grocery man - Sam 5 Random strangers Postman - Mr. Stanley The old widow down the lane - Ms. Zimas The musician who plays at the church - Mr. Cronister?? Animals Fred - Horse, pulls carriage Barney - Horse, Fred’s brother helps pull the carriage Dante’ - Charlotte’s cat, Alex got him for her Leah - Charity’s cat Scene 1: Act 1 Narrator: This play is called Travelers Lane, our story starts in a small town called Dentonburn. Population 200, Our main Characters are Charlotte Churchman and Alex Biddle. Charlotte is the daughter of a very wealthy merchant, and Alex is her father's apprentice, both of them live on Travelers Lane. [ SET: Around dinner time, small red barn Fred & Barney In stalls on either side.] {Alex enters carrying a bag of feed.} Alex: {wipes sweat off face with arm} [Sighs] I hope this heat stops soon. Charlotte: {peeking around the barn door} {Giggles} Alex: {looks behind him} Why hello Miss Charlotte. You’re here so visit Fred & Barney I presume? Charlotte: {looks shy} I um, yes of course. {Walks to pet Fred & Barney} Alex: {leaning against the stalls} They sure are nice horses your pa sure is lucky to have ‘em. Charlotte: {nods} Yes, although I do think Ms. Zimas has the best horses in town. Alex: {smiling} I do believe you are right Miss Charlotte. Charlotte: {looks an aha moment} Oh, no more formalities please, mayhap you shall just call me Charlotte? {smiles} Alex: {smiles} Of course m’lady, anything you shall desire. Susan Churchman: {In the distance} Charlotte! Where are you dear? Charlotte: {shouting out the barn door} Coming mother! {to Alex} I have to go, mayhap I will see you later? Alex: {smiles} When the stars come out meet me here. Charlotte: {smiles} Of course. {Charlotte runs off stage} End of Act 1. Scene 1: Act 2 [SET: Around dinner time, Small house, four chairs sit around a table Howard & Susan Chruchman are sitting at the table] {Charlotte walks/runs on stage} Susan Churchman: {Gestures to the seat beside her} Sit down Charlotte. Charlotte: {smiles, sits down} Yes mother? {looks to Susan} Susan Churchman: Where have you been Charlotte? My goodness, your new dress is filthy. Charlotte: {looks down at her dress} Oh, I was in the barn mama, I’m sorry I didn’t mean to get it dirty. Howard Churchman: {Looks suspicious} The barn? Did this have anything to do with the fact that I sent Alex to the barn? Susan Churchman: {gasps and looks at Charlotte} Charlotte?! If it had anything to do with that boy I should send you to your chamber this moment. Charlotte: {Looks between her parents} Mama, Papa, I just went to see Fred and Barney. Howard Churchman: {looks hard at Charlotte} Do not lie to us young lady, we go to great lengths to protect you. Susan Churchman: {looks at Howard then at Charlotte} Charlotte I want the truth and nothing but the truth. Charlotte: {Slumps and looks defeated} Yes mama, I went to see Alex. Howard Churchman: {leans back in his chair} Charlotte, I want you to stay away from Alex, Agreed? Charlotte: {slumps} But he’s my friend papa. Susan Churchman: {Looks hard at both Howard and Charlotte} Charlotte, I agree with your father, you need to keep away from that boy, and for heaven's sake sit up like a lady. Charlotte: {sits up straight} But mama Alex is nice. Susan Churchman: {looks at Charlotte} Charlotte, I will hear no more about you seeing Alex, you stay away from him. Charlotte: {looks sad and drawn} Yes mama. Howard Churchman: {looks to his wife} Dear, Is supper ready yet? Susan Churchman: {Smiles at Howard} Yes, let me get it for you. Charlotte: {looks toward Susan} Shall I help you mother? Susan Churchman: {Smiles at Charlotte} Yes Charlotte, come along. {Charlotte and Susan get up and walk off stage} {Alex walks on stage into the dining room and addresses Howard Churchman} Alex: I have finished unloading those feed bags, sir. Howard Churchman: {looks toward Alex} Good, good, Alex there is something I want to talk to you about. Please, sit down. Alex: {Sits} Yes sir? Have I done something wrong, sir? Howard Churchman: {Shakes his head} No, Charlotte just came back and told us she was in the barn and went there to see you. Alex: {looks confused} Oh, yes sir. I thought she was there to see the horses. Howard Churchman: {looks satisfied} Well, that was her original story, but she never usually cares about the horses. Alex: {has the look of an aha moment} Oh, well if I’d known I wouldn’t have encouraged it, sir. Howard Churchman: {looks confused} What do you mean my boy? Alex: {looks sad} Well, I had been talking to her, I genuinely thought she was there for the horses. It is not proper for the master's daughter to have any connection to the help, right sir? Howard Churchman: {looks pleased} Yes lad, you are correct. This means I would like you to stay away from my daughter, and she in turn will stay away from you, agreed? Alex: {slumps a bit} Agreed sir. Howard Churchman: {claps Alex on the back} Good lad. Now, my wife has just fixed dinner, you are welcome to stay. Alex: {smiles} Thank you sir, but I should get home to my ma. Howard Churchman: {smiles} Good lad, see you bright and early tomorrow. Alex: {nods slightly} Yes sir. {exits stage} {Susan & Charlotte enter carrying plates and trays} {Susan and Charlotte start organizing trays and plates} Howard Churchman: {putting food on his plate} Alex just dropped by. He has agreed to stay distant from you Charlotte. {looks toward Charlotte} Charlotte: {stops dishing out food, looks sadened} Oh, okay pa. Susan Churchman: {smiles} Wonderful, now everybody eat up. End of Act 2. Scene 1: Act 3 [SET: dining room after dinner] {Charlotte & Susan clearing table} Susan Churchman: {looks toward Charlotte} Charlotte, I’ll finish up here, you should get ready for bed. Charlotte: {smiles} Yes mother. {Charlotte runs off stage} What to do next????

Totally understandable, You are very talented though.

It's okay! That is completely understandable! Love your work thought :D

Yes, I'm halfway to novel length, however, I'm holding off on uploading more, because I am very protective of my work and I don't want to run the risk of someone trying to steal it, even if it's not the whole thing. Sorry.

Omg, I'm really invested, are you planning to make more?

Just a reminder to not share Wattpad or any other external platform usernames :)

Thanks! Maybe we can make writersky popular. Though that will eventually go downhill too if it gets popular.