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The Story I promised you all


TheOriginalAxel

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Allright, here is part 2

Chapter 2: Moving Day

Abandoned 

“Is that everything loaded into the van?” my adoptive mother asks. 

“I believe so, let me just double check every room really quick.” I reply. 

It is moving day, at long last. We are finally selling up and getting a bigger house because the 3-bedroom house we currently live in is too small for a growing teen such as myself. 

“I’ll meet you there, I just want to go to and say goodbye to some of my friends first.” I tell him. 

“Ok, if, you’re sure. Do you know the way?” My adoptive father asks. 

“Yes dad, of course I know where it is, I mean, I go past it every day on the way to school” I tell him. 

“I’m really going to miss this place, we have been here for so long and we have made so many memories here,” I think to myself. 

Slowly, I walked to my friend's house to tell him that he won’t see me around the neighborhood anymore but that he will still see me at school when suddenly.... 

*Bump* I stop. 

“I am so sorry, it is completely my fault, I wasn’t looking where I was walking” I say. 

“Honestly, it’s Ok don’t worry about it, mate” He replied, in a voice so soft I thought it was a woman. 

I look up. WOW, he is so beautiful that I have to keep turning away to stop myself blushing. 

“Are you Okay?” He asks, “y-y-yeah, I’m fine, are you okay?” I say. 

“I’m fine just a little bit …...” he says but doesn’t continue. 

“What?” I ask curiously. “I’m just a little bit... I think.... Will you go out with me?” 

Wait What! Did I hear that correctly? Are my ears deceiving me right now? 

“s-s-s-sure, I didn’t catch your name” I reply. 

“My names Oliver, what is your name?” he says 

“My name is Axel, you have a cute name” I say, “I haven’t seen you around here before” 

“Yeah, I only moved here recently.” Oliver says.  

“Where do you live? You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to” I say to him. 

“I will be living in that house down there with the ‘for sale’ sign out front” he says, I instantly know he is talking about my old house. 

“Well, I hope you love living there, I used to live in that house with my adoptive parents, but we decided to buy a bigger house because they said that I need extra space for things like my hobbies and studies 

“Oh, which room was yours?” He asks 

“Mine was the room on the top floor. Which one is yours going to be?” I ask. 

“The one on the top floor” he replies 

“If you find anything in there please let me know. Here is my number just in case” I say and give him my number. 

“I’ll make sure I ring you if I find anything” Oliver replies. “Before you go, did you say that you are adopted? I mean, I wasn’t sure if I heard you correctly.” 

“Yeah, I have been living with my adoptive parents since I was 6 months old” I tell him “How about you? How are your parents?” I ask. 

“I am the same as you, I live with my adoptive parents” He says. 

OMG I can’t believe I am dating someone who is adopted like me. 

End of Chapter 2 

I hope you like chapter 2. Chapter 3 will be following on very soon so keep your peepers peeled

 

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@TheOriginalAxel, I know I'm exceptionally late, but I hope you’re still working on chapter three.  So, if you’ve seen a love story arc (if its not a love story, just tell me)  it goes something like this: the two people dont know each other, then they might begin to like each other, but then it goes downhill and they start hating each other. Then something happens and they like each other more and more, but something negative happens (usually a misunderstanding ) and the relationship gets extra bad, and they hate each other. Then, they resolve something, or something happens and thats the climax of the story, and the relationship gets awesome and they realize what they’ve missed. 
 

Sorry, that was really long Aaanyway, try sending them on a date, creat some parent-kid tension and add some side characters like teachers and friends 

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20 hours ago, Emberfrost12 said:

@TheOriginalAxel, I know I'm exceptionally late, but I hope you’re still working on chapter three.  So, if you’ve seen a love story arc (if its not a love story, just tell me)  it goes something like this: the two people dont know each other, then they might begin to like each other, but then it goes downhill and they start hating each other. Then something happens and they like each other more and more, but something negative happens (usually a misunderstanding ) and the relationship gets extra bad, and they hate each other. Then, they resolve something, or something happens and thats the climax of the story, and the relationship gets awesome and they realize what they’ve missed. 
 

Sorry, that was really long Aaanyway, try sending them on a date, creat some parent-kid tension and add some side characters like teachers and friends 

Yeah I am still working on chapter 3.

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8 hours ago, TheOriginalAxel said:

Yeah I am still working on chapter 3.

OMG HiiIIIII @TheOriginalAxelI missed you where have you been!? iys been a while since we've been talked. how are you?

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On 3/15/2022 at 9:25 PM, Chabela said:

OMG HiiIIIII @TheOriginalAxelI missed you where have you been!? iys been a while since we've been talked. how are you?

I hae just been busy and me and Oliver are done

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1 hour ago, TheOriginalAxel said:

I hae just been busy and me and Oliver are done

oh ok but may I ask who Oliver is? is it Leaf or I must've forgotten who that is, my head is damaged like that

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On 3/21/2022 at 1:08 PM, Chabela said:

oh ok but may I ask who Oliver is? is it Leaf or I must've forgotten who that is, my head is damaged like that

yh its leaf.

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On 4/21/2022 at 6:04 PM, Chabela said:

im okay but how about you?

I'm good. Finally finished chapter 3 but didn't make much progress bc now I'm stuck halfway through chapter 5

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