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Wlw Story That I Promised You! 😏 Pt.2 More Of Prologue And A Bit Of Chapter 1 !


Chabela

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hey everyone! I'm so glad a lot of you liked the small bit I showed you guys of the story, and guess what, i have a name for the story! it is called The Girl Who Can See Me. here it is!!!!

 

                        Prologue 

 

She pushes me against the wall, and until now I really understand the urgent need coursing through her because my back recoils from the thrashing pain, but I don’t move from under her, god knows what she’ll do next. Or worse, what I’ll do if she moves any closer. “What-” I pause when her finger lightly traces my hand -that is currently against the wall- to my shoulder, comprehending every comprehension there is to take in and feel, and suddenly I’m not so cold anymore. Heat flares on my body, hair standing on ends from the nerves as I try to pull in what little and as much oxygen I can pull into my body. “What-” I pause and try again. I can’t keep my defenses short, no matter how breathless I sound and feel. “ What are you doing? I can’t-” I pause again because there she is, 1-2 inches within my mouth distance, so close I’m practically caressing her lips. So close that if I move any closer, I would be kissing her. So close that if I breathe too deeply my chest, legs, arms, all body parts pressed to hers, even as I struggle to straighten my body. I slowly bring my hands to her shoulders, planning to push her away, but I hesitate. And the question is, why? I tightened my grip and, impulsively, shoved her body to mine because fuck the rules, I want to feel her cherry limeade scented lips pushed against mine as if I’m the only thing that she can crave. The only girl who can see me. The only thing that makes food pale in comparison, the second I also realize that my hunger has skyrocketed, but I only realize that for a second before she hits us to the floor, because of course a girl like her has a hunger like mine. 

 

                  Chapter 1

              Innocent//Hunger 



I woke up with a startled panic. I sighed. Just a dream. Although, like all my incredibly romance-induced dreams, they seem so real. Not as in realistic real, but real enough for me to believe it. The universe just likes to fuck me up like that though, right? Can’t attack me physically, verbally, or mentally while I’m up and awake, so of course, when I’m most vulnerable, it attacks the fact that I’m single for life and creates this perfect girl for me in my mind, makes me spend the dreamy day with her, kiss her even, then stop it like hold up, you’re having too much happiness and fun, then abruptly cuts me off from the dream and back to reality, where I’m at right now. I suck in a good amount of oxygen and collect myself from that wondrous nightmare. The last thing I need is an imaginary love life. I put on the clothes I left in my drawer last night, grabbed my backpack and keys, and hightailed it to the car. It is such a relief that I don’t have to rely on the bus anymore; this permit is saving me a lot of time to when that shit was stressing me since the fifth grade, the whole mantra of waking up at 4:00 am to get ready and my hair. Ugh. Well, at least if I would’ve gotten to the bus today I wouldn’t be late for school. Not to make it worse, I live 20 minutes away from the freaking school. I went a little over the speed limit, but I don’t regret it because I’m just over the hill where the school is. I take a minute to realize that there are surprisingly empty spaces in the parking lot. Not many are here today, I guess. Not that I’d worry much; it’s a Monday. I park near the entrance and rapidly run behind the other student that opened the door, and I get in before it closes. I saw my newest best friend, Sady light up the second she saw me and gave me a big hug like a little kid when they see their mother after a long day in kindergarten.  “Ellace! I missed you!” and basically crushed my ribs. It’s no wonder why her cousins call her little Malice; she’s a sneaky one. I pat her on the back and said “hey Malice, what’s up?” she flashed a grin at me and morphed her face into a mischievous smirk. “ My cousins are coming today. I cannot wait for you to meet Archie, and I can’t wait to get you two together” she smugly mentioned. I sighed and lightly rolled my eyes. Ever since Romaine and I broke up, Sads has been trying to put me back out there again, if that girl, boy, enby, or other looks interesting or something to make me forget about him, but nothing has worked for the past year, especially since his parents decided that this school was better than his old one so they moved and now I get to see him with his happy self and girlfriend, Errotica. Errotica and I are close, yea, but we’ve been kind of distant since she started dating him. And Sads has been giving Errotica her back since she was raised in the outdated girl code and how feminism shouldn’t be taken lightly, so that is placed, and while I appreciate her loyalty, I think we both know that her cousin isn’t a bad person, and should just leave it at that. “ Sads, you know that you’re cousin will most likely not convince me. Besides,

 

 

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1 hour ago, Elated Homoromantic said:

I love the way that you always end with a cliff hanger.

I love leaving my readers on the hook! ^^

1 hour ago, Elated Homoromantic said:

I wish I was as creative as you

thank you! it's just a natural talent really 

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I think that your story is beautiful! I love the way you write it, I love your characters , and I love-...you know what n-never mind it's not that important anway "^///^"

*anyway

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On 1/26/2022 at 10:41 AM, Leafiebean said:

I think that your story is beautiful! I love the way you write it, I love your characters , and I love-...you know what n-never mind it's not that important anway "^///^"

*anyway

hey leaf!

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1 minute ago, Chabela said:

hey leaf!

Hey, bela, I have something important to tell you, Leaf has been banned until the 7th of feb (ps me and him are more than just friends now I hope you don't mind)

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1 minute ago, Elated Homoromantic said:

Hey, bela, I have something important to tell you, Leaf has been banned until the 7th of feb (ps me and him are more than just friends now I hope you don't mind)

oh I'm sorry I was hoping to see him 
and yeah I totally understand! I'm in a relationship myself so it's perfectly fine! 

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I miss talking to you, Leaf, and a lot of other people! it has been kinda rough and overwhelming (in a good way and bad way) and my best friend came back to my school after SOOOO long so I've been quite occupied. also me and Jaxxy (the girl Leaf was talking to) we know each other in irl and out friendship isn't going very well and I've been feeling kinda depressed because of that and  if you don't mind me talking about my problems.. well I would like to tell you only if you are open to it :) I always want to make sure the people I know are okay with everything I say 

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Just now, Elated Homoromantic said:

I am doing good. I also wanted to say that you inspired me to write a story of my own entitled 'abandoned'

oh that is great! also I think that there's a key to unlock all your creativity for poems and stories and books like that and I'll tell you the secret: to find something you passiontaley love or find something you strongly feel about  or just the most emotional things happening in your life right now and put it into words! I have used that for like 90% of my writing and look how well it turns out! I also have a crush on someone right now and a partner I'm proud of so I'm going to post a new series showing you all the poems I have made that are specifically going into a realistic, touchable poem book soon! 

 

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Just now, Elated Homoromantic said:

I will be posting my story in around 20 minutes.

oooooooooh can't wait! I'll look out for it! and get ready for mine because I'm posting now for the new series!

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